I am working on a second-person story, but 'you' are a named character. In the story, you are Lyra Heartstrings, with three humans getting intimate with you. It's a very simple story. No Anon/human in sight. Plus, you are the pony getting made love to.
Our sun is very, very heavy. Assuming that your sun is the same mass as our sun ((5.97237×1024 kg) × 333,000), it would be almost impossible, as 1 kg is about half of the weight of a very heavy book, so (5.97237×1024 kg) × 333,000 is very unrealistic unless Celestia is some kind of god. But here in the alternate universe, the sun doesn't move around the earth, the Earth moves around the sun!
Do you think I shall keep using the Anon, second person stories format?
Or should I try challenge myself by not using Anon and second person a little more? Not to abandon Anon completely, just use him less.
Personally, I like using Anon. He's my Lego Brick Character and I can put him in ridiculous situations easily. Granted, that sounds lazy, but I just find Anon very funny in general.
Except not really.
I have noticed significant number of people cannot get past the use of second person. After consulting with a mod, I have decided to add a chapter at the end of my stories that will be the entire story reformatted to be in first person. As I work through my posted works, I will update the descriptions to reflect this. I'll list the stories here as I do so.
Okay, wow thanks! Seriously, thanks for following and for favoriting A Bitter Sweet Surprise. I honestly didn't expect much of a reaction from it. I really didn't. I just wrote it because of how much I've enjoyed the Sour Sweet Stories that Nico-Stone Rupan has put out for us. Naturally I fell in love with the idea of Sour becoming a mom, and I followed that line of thought until I had written about four pages.
I find myself agreeing with this. (There has been some talk about this recently in the Human in Equestria group) Don't get me wrong, he's useful for funny one-shots and short sex stories. Yes, I Bendy lord of trashy Anon Second Person fics knows they are trash.
Today, I wrote my first serious story in a long while. An hour of that was spent on the second-to-last paragraph. But I came up with the concept and landscape picture about a year and a half ago. I'd appreciate if you could tell me you think I did. Thanks, and have a great day!
I tried my hoof at second person present tense in my newest story, Tending the Roses, and I think the experiment came out rather well.
Lemme know what everypony thinks!!
~Noir 
I'm determined to get it finished. I give this passion; biggest reason why it's taking me so long to finish it. But, I'm willing to give you all a nice sizable taste of how it reads, or ones that follow along with me on this journey.
Please, enjoy what I have for now and happy holidays! 
I’m starting work on a second person multiple chapter romance series called New Life With. Currently I’m writing the first one titled New Life With: Vinyl Scratch.
Each one of these stories I write will be a second person romance of the reader (Anonymous) and the character for that story I.e. twilight sparkle, Rainbowdash, spitfire etc.
Any advice or help from fellow second person human x pony writers is greatly appreciated (considering this is my first try 😂)
Inspired by this song.
Wanted to challenge myself by writing a story in a short time span. It was fun!
So Low Roar's new album just came out this month, and there's this one song I'm absolutely hooked on. It's beautifully sad. So I made a story about it.
It's a bit rough in spots that I'm hoping to refine up until I publish it, but I hope you enjoy it! I'll be publishing it around 1PM tomorrow!
Role Reversal can sometimes be the hardest to write for. It's because of Rarity's voice and mannerisms. I sometimes have to stop and go "That doesn't sound right" when it's coming out of Rarity's mouth and re-do entire parts of the story. Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash, Twilight, Applejack, and Pinkie Pie were easy because it's easy for me to get into their head. Rarity is another pickle altogether. I had trouble with Freudian Slip and I've had trouble with Role Reversal.
Does anyone else have trouble with second person stories? I have nothing against the stories themselves, or the authors who write them, but I have significant trouble reading them. First person stories I don't read very often (though I don't see them often either), and I'm definitely a 3rd person/3PO (not the droid) story writer and reader. I just cannot grok 2nd person stories for more than half a chapter before I set them down. I hate that, too, because there have been some stories I've been
Call 'em fishes because they're of-fishial!
Eh? Eh? Nothing? Alright then, no jokes...
Anyway guys, here I will announce official mini-series and stories to come in the near future and in 2016! Now don't be confused, I'm not releasing a schedule since Lord knows I won't be able to live off that stuffs. With that, I'll be confirming four future projects I'll be submitting!
1) The Dance
So, for anyone who actually enjoyed or at least had feels with When You Least Expect It, you'll be happy to know that I've almost finished its one-part sequel. I was tempted to do it in two parts and, you know, I may tack on an additional bit if the mood strikes me. But as of now it's looking like it'll be maybe 5k words, will have mild sexual content (enough to have an M tag, but nothing too far), and will give you a
In case it hasn't been extremely obvious by now, I have more than a few ideas for some stories running around in my head at the moment. It also probably isn't a secret by now that I am starting to enjoy writing both 2nd Person stories and stories involving monster mares.
Now recently another idea popped into my head and I thought I would just share it and see how many of you like it as well as receive some feedback on it.
I’m pretty sure that all of you have read more than one story in your life, and I’d bet that most of you noticed that stories can be told from a variety of perspectives. If you prefer a somewhat fancier term, such a perspective can be also called a point of view (POV for short). Types of POVs, their usage, and common pitfalls are what’s this miniguide going to be about. Just like in case of the guides previously published here (and archived in my blogs), this is meant primarily for beginners
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